My rating: 4 of 5 stars
This is a perfect example of how a good rewrite can greatly improve a book.
I received this book free in exchange for an honest review. The first time through, however, I noticed very significant grammar errors and weaknesses in the plot. I informed the author of my concerns. To his credit, he said he'd heard similar critiques from others. He let me know he was in contact with an editor and would be reworking the novel.I told him I would reserve my review until after reading the new edition.
I'm glad I did.
SYNOPSIS FROM GOODREADSThree young and innocent youths awake one day in their remote village in the Northern Philippines. They could not know that the events of the day would change their lives, more than that - it would end their lives.
The day started well – breakfast, preparing for a fishing trip, the anticipation of an exciting day out – maybe with a good meal at the end of it. Along the way, they find a fortune - enough to keep them all in riches for many lifetimes. Their naive misjudgments bring about their downfall – and start a chain of events that will change the course of history for the small South East Asian nation.
Within days, more lives will be lost and fortunes will change hands. A chain of consequences has been started which will spread like a spiders web and end in tragedy for many and triumph for a few
WHY IT WORKSDeadly Election, in its current form, is a strong novel. It is based on real events and reads like non-fiction. That means it is very believable.
In the rewrite, the character of Chloe was greatly enhanced. She gives us a very human and relatively untainted view of this crime-filled, seedy world.
A word of caution: this is a very adult novel. There are graphic depictions of violence and violations.
IN CONCLUSIONI feel very privileged to have seen the novel in both iterations. If Arthur Crandon continues to grow like this, we can expect very good things from him in the future.
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